I liked that you got to pick what emotion you wanted to do.
I found hard was to do the eyes stomach and the hands.
I found easy was to do the feet heart and lips.
Her mouth is frowning down
Her eyes were full of tears dripping down her face.
Her hands were wiping her tears off her face
Her stomach had butterflies in it
Her heart was crying.
Her feet were walking slowly.
Kia ora Mylee im Ella from M3 Grey Main school,i like the way you added capital letters and good describing words and i also like your picture you added but maybe next time add a bit more punctuation. i remember when we did show not tell i did upset too ka pai.
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